Hey, I’m back… crazy RL work is a bit of a pain in me arse, but yeah. So my snippet today comes from a little short story I’ve been working hard on in-between trying to sleep and trying to pay bills. Please be aware, the story has not seen the eyes of an editor at all. The working title is Bescreen’d in Night, and it’s a short story that rounds up the end Halley’s Comet… and it was meant to be writ, but never happened for whatever reason.
Like Halley’s Comet, it’s written from Jonathan Shea’s POV, and it takes place directly after David goes missing. I kind of bent the rules, considering my poems don’t have any real punctuation. I counted the three sentences before and the three sentences after to make my six.
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Pulling the moleskin journal out of his back pocket, Jonathan hiccupped and grabbed the pen from the inside pocket of his coat. Bending over the journal as he opened it, he scribed the song exploding in his head. He knew the Bowie influences would be obvious, but he made a mental note to put it only in his journal.
Night bleeds into day
I am spun out of orbit
Day blazes into night
It’s been so long
Well, it’s been so long
My eyes scan the stars
Cold on earth and broken too
The stars blaze bright for me
It’s been so long
Well, it’s been so long
Forty-two days I waited
Forty-two nights I died
Forty-two days I froze
Forty-two nights I lied
And it’s been so long
You’ve been gone so long
I’m so afraid of losing you
Stuffing the pen in the journal, Jonathan shoved it back into the pocket as he heard someone on the ladder. Scooting over into the corner, he wrapped his arms around his shins and pushed his face into his knees. The tears were so close he wasn’t certain he could keep them back much longer, but the time ticked by relentlessly and still they had no lead on David.
Gah, I just want to read about these two forever. And I want to give Jonathan a big hug here. 😦
I am almost finished with Bescreen’d, and I will give it a run through the editors and then post it up here. I am also working on something for Jonathan which parts of may see the light… but definitely not all of unless he wants to completely change the course of their history (like by a couple of books)! Once I finish that I am hoping David starts to talk again so that I can finish book 2!
Lovely, but so sad…
Thank you! I promise it gets better! 😊
I need to read Halley’s Comet! Great snippet!
It’s under the free reads on the right sidebar!
Oh, and thank you for your kind words!
So much heartache!
I promise, it gets so much better!
Sad but so lovely too