And so begins my foray into the six sentence snippets of my WIPs… I’m hoping I can do this correctly! Haha… if not, it’ll be interesting to see how it works.
Without further adieu, here is my go:
Jonathan broached, stepping in close to tug David against him, his hands brushing David’s hair over his ears. “What upset you on this amazing day?”
“I think we should have the water checked out.” David sighed. “People keep drinking it, I’ma go crazy. Like the literal form—I will go farking insane.”
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Something in the water? Sounds ominous.
Welcome to Rainbow Snippets, M. Leanne! You did great. The only thing missing is a link back to the group so your regular readers can find the rest of the snippets. 🙂
Ahhhh… I will fix it! Thankee, Charley!
Oooh, water’s an issue? Are we in Age of Sail territory here?
Hahaha… it’s a great comment, isn’t it? 😊
That’s an interesting bit.
Thankee! I hope you like the novel it comes from! 😀
Yikes! What’s in the water? Great snippet. 🙂
Haha! I think people like David just waaaayyyyy too much! 😀